Story Narrative Imaginative … Creative …

At the beginning of your story writing unit, have students write a story and assess using a narrative quick scale (see assessment tab above for student-friendly rubrics).  Use this assessment to inform your instruction.  As you explicitly teach each mini-lessons like those below, assess again, providing students with descriptive feedback regarding their progress. When students see their progress on a highlighted rubric, they are motivated to continue.

Book Title/Cover Story Overview Objective Lesson Links & Black Line Masters
You are going to love this book by Bethany Barton!  I sure did!  Spiders can be difficult to love, but the more you know about them and the more humour that surrounds them, the more chance there is for an attraction to emerge! Where do I begin?  In this lessons, there are suggestions for outdoor learning, art, inquiry,  spider  research, a maker activity, checking out emotions, and some writing of course! Writing Trait: Ideas & Voice

I’m Trying to Love ~Spiders

Several picture books are featured in this inquiry into words through playful creativity. Children are encouraged to think creatively, play games and create some of their own as they launch into all the fun that words have to offer!  Writing Trait:  Word Choice

Words ~ A Playful Exploration

This book might be about robots that magically transform into a super shiny metal ROBO-BOOK, but this lesson is slightly different! In this writing lesson, students will go on a scavenger hunt in the library to find a secret trick that some writers know about.  But what is it?  Your students will love this mystery!  Writing Trait:  Organization

Leads ~ What’s the Secret Trick? Create Curiosity!

Thanks to the students in Alysha Birnie’s class at Huband!

  In this Robert Munsch classic, playdough cookies are made realistically enough to cause a variety of people to actually take a bite.  Using playdough, students create a cookie of thier own making sure to add lots of details! Once complete, students walk around the classroom offering written, positive, descriptive feedback about the details they like in the cookies they see.  A perfect fit with assessment for learning strategies. Writing Trait: Ideas

Mmmmm Cookies Robert Munsch:  Creating a cookie and providing descriptive feedback to other cookie creators!

Things To Do brings life to the small moments in life.  This story is cleverly told from different perspectives. Writing in role is always a favourite and this book provides a recipe how to do just that! Writing Trait: Ideas

Adding Details ~ Things to Do

Toshi's Little Treasures Toshi and his Grandmother notice everything as they wander through their community. This book is another one that lends to outdoor observation.  In this lesson, students will be invited to create a scientific notebook in which they draw and carefully label the items they carefully observe while outside. Writing Trait: Ideas

Toshi’s Little Treasures:  Creating a Scientific Notebook

 How to Babysit Grandpa This book offers great tips on how to be a, “grandpa-sitter!” Since reading and writing float of a sea of talk (James Britton), encourage lots of storytelling about experiences with babysitters. Writing Trait: Ideas (details)

How To Babysit a Grandpa

“Sit back, relax, stay right where you are.  It’s time to reveal my spectacular car!”This rhyming book is sure to spark curiosity and fuel creativity! Kids will use their imagination and variety of How-To-Draw books to design and label, then write about a very creative car they have imagined.  Throw in some cars to play with and a trip out to the parking lot to build some car-specific vocabulary, and you’ve got a kid-friendly, playful writing lesson! Writing Trait: Ideas (details) & Organization (beginning and ending)

If I Built a Car

If I Built a Car gr 2 and 3 BLM


When Henry loses his favourite toy rabbit Raspberry, he seeks the advice of his Grandpa who tells him to use his imagination and pretend his friend is still with him. When Henry pretends, he creates quick stories with a main idea and details.  In this lesson, students will create an imaginary story with their own main idea and detail. Pop the pages together to create a class book. Writing Trait: Ideas

The Power of Henry’s Imagination

Chico Bon Bon a monkey who has been captured by an organ grinder.  But Chico Bon Bon has his tool belt with him and devises a creative plan of escape. Chico Bon Bon’s plan of escape is written up step by step and every tool he uses is carefully described.  In this lesson, your students will learn about the names and uses of tools, then create a plan of escape similar to that of Chico!  Writing Trait: Ideas and Word Choice

Monkey With a Tool Belt

Monkey With a Tool Belt ~ How to Draw a Monkey

Monkey With a Tool Belt ~ Writing BLM with targets

Monkey With a Tool Belt ~ Writing BLMs

 Printing on 11 x 17 tabloid paper will give students lots of room to draw and write.

An exclamation mark desperately wants to fit in with his peers, the periods, but he is so different.  When a question mark asks far too many questions, exclamation mark yells at him to stop! By doing so, he finds his place in life. After hearing this creative story about periods, exclamation marks and question marks, students will create artful examples of each. Writing Trait: Conventions

Exclamation Mark by Amy Krouse Rosenthal

Hermit crab needs a new shell, but each one is, well, a little too plain. Just as hermit crab adds items to decorate his shell, writing needs a little decorating too.  In this lesson students will add details to their drawing of a house, then write about their additions.  In another activity, students will stretch their minds creatively as they use sea creatures in innovative ways!  Writing Trait: Ideas ~ adding details

House for a Hermit crab adding Details

Charlie is babysitting Lola and must get her to eat some not-so-favourite foods. How will he manage that? In this lesson link, students will examine the problem and solution relationstionship in this story and others.  Writing Trait: Ideas

I Will Never Not Ever Eat a Tomato SWBS

Willow wants to be heard, but her tiny voice means that she is often left out. Does Willow find her voice? Read this delightful book to find out what happens. Read Willow’s dialogue in a whisper and have a conversation about the voice trait. Students will fill out a SWBS graphic organizer to determine this story’s problem and solution. This prepares them to write stories that have clear ideas. Writing Trait: Ideas and Voice

Willow’s Whispers

Daniel Kirk’s Library Mouse is a sweet story of a mouse, turned writer, who lives in a library.  When library patrons want to see who the amazing new author is, a shy mouse has an interesting solution and a warm message for our young writers! In this lesson, children play first, then write about a mouse house they have created.  The learning intention is to add deluxe details to capture the reader’s interest. Writing Trait: Ideas

Library Mouse: Adding Deluxe Details

And a sequel by the same author:

Library Mouse Home Sweet Home Maker Activity

Lean the book to the left. What will happen to the dots? Now try shaking it. Predict your way through this book as you hand it over to kids to rub, shake, tap and lean. Playful literacy at its best! Don’t miss this delightful book.  It’s perfect as an introduction to the Voice trait in writing and a fabulous book to share predictions. Student predictions turn into creative text alternatives. Read the attached lesson for a fun response to this book. Writing Trait: Ideas 

Press Here

Press Here Class Book With Special thanks to Mary Weiler’s class at Ecole Puntledge for their examples.

Art’s supplies have a mind of their own and come to life in the studio. This book is full of word play. “2B or not 2B? That is the question.” – asked by pencils of course! This book has a great example of a dialogue lead that not only pulls the reader in, but it also hints at the problem yet to come. In this lesson, students search for other examples of picture books that begin with a lead. They’re hard to find, but worth the effort to model this clever writing skill. Writing Trait: Organization

Art’s Supplies dialogue leads

Kids will connect with the central message of this book and get a little history lesson as well~ were cave children asking the same question? This book offers another great example of a dialogue lead to hook the reader.  During this lesson, students search for other examples of picture books that begin with conversation. They’re hard to find, but worth the effort to model this clever writing skill. A list of books with dialogue leads is included here! Writing Trait: Organization

Why Do I Have to Make My Bed dialogue leads

Bear does not like visitors. He even has a sign to prove it. But the little mouse is not so quick to leave. Will bear have a change of heart? In this lesson, dialogue writing is explicitly taught. Writing Traits: Voice & Conventions

Dialogue ~ A Visitor for Bear Lesson

Dialogue ~ A Visitor for Bear BLM

Gr 2 & 3 examples from Carol Holland’s class @ Courtenay El.

Pete is a perfectly predictable pig. So what does a predicatble pig do when an unconventional, creative elephant enters his world? Add this book to your read aloud repertoire. It will not disappoint! This lesson is about writing sentences that are different lengths.  We want our students to know that a mixture of short, medium and long sentences sound great when read aloud. This is a perfect mentor text for that! Writing Traits: Sentence Fluency

Pete and Pickles

Pete and Pickles writing examples 

Get the tissue ready! Milo doesn’t see what’s so special about moms. After all, they are nothing more than broccoli bullies! But when Milo travels to another planet, he might just figure out their worth! In this lesson, dialogue writing is explicitly taught. Writing Traits: Voice & Conventions

Mars Needs Moms Dialogue Lesson

Frog wants to fly, but flying is a bird thing. When frog rescues a baby bird, flying just might become a frog thing too! In the first lesson link, dialogue writing is explicitly taught.In the second link, students will examine the problem and solution framework of this story and others. Writing Traits: Voice & Conventions

Dialogue from A Frog Thing

Writing Trait: Ideas

A Frog Thing Story Framework Lesson

 Pip's Trip Pip, Midge, and Dot are the cute but clueless hens of Loopy Coop Farm. Every day they watch the farmer’s truck drive away, and they wonder what it would be like to take a ride. An adventure awaits!  The Somebody, Wanted, But, So strategy is a powerful one for primary classes.  It gives young children a solid structure to better understand the parts of a story.  This strategy can also be used as a framework for students to create their own stories. Writing Trait: Ideas

Pip’s Trips (Somebody Wanted But So Story Framework strategy)

All the Dandelions are disappearing quickly, but Christopher Nibble finds one. Will he gobble it up quickly before others find it? This book has a heartwarming theme. Students will examine the problem and solution framework of this story and others. Writing Trait: Ideas

Christopyher Nibble SWBS (Somebody Wanted But So strategy)

Missy isn’t keen on books, but with just the right book, Miss Brooks might be able to change that attitude. In this lesson link, character flaws are examined as a way to create a problem for a story. Writing Trait: Ideas

Miss Brooks Loves Books and I Don’t

Follow the daily events told from the perspective of a goldfish. When living conditions become too crowded, will this goldfish enjoy his new, quiet surroundings? In this lesson, students write diary entries pretending they are a house pet, farm or zoo animal that is dealing with an environmental issue. Writing Traits: Voice and Ideas

Memoirs of a Goldfish